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Originally posted by The Eurostar:
...the same can be applied to the turtle? [eh... i dunno... ]

THE LORD OF THE FLIES and dance can take a whole lot more pain and damage than that. Old B might have to take a few days off, but he'll be fine, thanks to Priest's last minute save.

Ya see, this was all my trick. Have Priest save a beloved character so people finally accept him as a teammember [wink] :lol:

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Actually Chewy, the Captain knows exactly what I wanted and very nicely handled the situation! Great job man, love the post!

Oh... [gulp!] ...oops.

Sorry 'bout that, Philsy...

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Why does everyone assume that my next post is going to be "massive"? It might be only three lines........YOU don't know!

...dammit... [...rassamnfrackin...]

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Three lines from you would be very... unusual. :lol:

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I hope no one minds me going ahead and freeing the brainwashed army. I had begun the set up in my post with Griss and I thought that this way not only made sense but also forced the two teams to work together.

Also, I hope Phil doesn't mind that I fucked with his character's hair cut [wink]

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I would like to offically call the last post in the X-Mas Issue and the next official issue.

Thank you and have a nice day :)

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Okay, posted.

The rest is up to Mxy and Grimmly.

After I posted, I read where Gooz had Phil out. Well, let's just say that he got better for a little while. Long enough for the scenes in my post. Is that okay?

BTW, I've also got an 'out' for the LLance and Velo things. So, no one panic....

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quote:
Originally posted by The Eurostar:
Three lines from you would be very... unusual. :lol:

(*sigh*)...I know.... [wink] :lol:

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So much for three lines...



Pro, as always you impress. Great job man. Really great job.

Oh, and I might be back with some good news in a little while. :)

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Nicely done, gents.

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I officially ask the last post in this story, BEFORE the epilogues.

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Great start with the special, I love it.

(And if anyone wonder, I have not yet read the main story, so I don't give the usual praise to Pro. Yet.)

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ok, so it's mxy, then me, then euro, then the epilogues? that right?

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Yes, I guess so.

Pro, great post. As usual you bend any character to your own schemes (Merlin is codenamed "The Walker" because he walks on air, but it was so cool his crawl toward safety that I don't argue), but the final product is fantastic.

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I ask also for one thing: the Annunaki Inanna has not appeared in the story; probably she has perished under the fall of the Nibiru, but please nobody touches her. I have something in mind.

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*sigh*

Sorry, everyone. My computer crashed last week, and I am using the Library computer right now. [sad]

I see Grimm's gone ahead and started the Christmas Special -- very good! I don't know how soon I'll be back, so it's possible I may miss out on that story altogether (though I hope not).

BTW, I still have something to write in issue #14 -- dealing with the leftover subplot of the intruder in Vanguard Complex. Euro knows what I intended for this, but I have written it and will put it in the blank slot that I left on one of the pages in the story, so don't delete it. And don't mention anything about the intruder subplot or "Agent X" at all, please. Thanks. Oh, and I won't be able to post that one post I wanted to until I get my own computer back and working, as this stupid Library computer doesn't have any option for floppy disks [...rassamnfrackin...] and I don't want to try re-writing that post from memory here (it's long).

Anyway, I hope to be back soon, and I hope the Christmas Special isn't over by that time. Seeyas.

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right...i'm having trouble viewing some of the posts, so hopefully by posting here it may clear things up...


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so...apparently i can't see anything...


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Hey, weren't there some more posts after mine? And what happened to pages 7 through 10 of the story?!? I have them saved in case they need to be posted again.

BTW, in case my last post (from today) didn't take, I'm back. I'm on AIM as "The Time Trust" for as long as I'm on this other computer (my original one needs to be fixed).


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Good going on the Christmast story, folks.

Just in case I will not have the time to get on-line later, Merry Christmast to everyone.

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"Don't Call Me 'Tiny'" Tim Trust also wishes to convey his Christmas wishes: "God bless us, everyone."

BTW, since Mxy's last post was deleted during all the board switch-overs along with all the other recent posts, I reposted it as well as my own post (which was the third time I tried to post it -- I hope the damn thing TAKES this time...)


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Ok, posted in the main story. . .looks like the new boards is working finally. I guess this means that Gooz and I will have to repost our Christmas story posts. . .

Very tired at the moment, been working all night.

Welcome back TTT.

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Okay, I can read other people's post now!

Merry Christmas! I hope I get a car!


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Grimm : Fantastic job with Naecken's death. Very brutal and to the point. Now, I suggest you seek psychiatric help for whatever pent-up rage that burns within you....

Mxy : Brilliant. Loved the entire flavor of your posts. 'The limbo between posts' comment was hilarious. So, now, what's up with killing Mick? Damn you, this had better be just a fake-out, or something! DON'T TAKE MICK/MXY AWAY!!

And, hey, Merry Christmas !!

CJ, good luck with the car....

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Thanks, Pro.

Wait n' see.


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Just to show how dedicated I am, guys and gal, I stayed up until 4 AM last night (the day before Christmas Eve, no less) catching up on all the posts in the story, and I'm very impressed. Now I'm [censored] tired.

Pro: Great use of The Time Trust and the Courts of Light, man! It was completely unexpected but well-placed nonetheless. The Time Trust himself was a kind of Deus Ex Machina (literally the "God in the Machine" ), though this wasn't the first time he was used that way. I enjoyed the use of the Order a great deal as well. Hell, I enjoyed all of the stuff you did.

Gooz: We finally got to see you writing again more regularly since the beginning of issue #13, and the wait was worth it. Good use of the Annunaki and Priest's (almost) death-scene was touching. Thanks for explaining the whole deal with him and Kit Piper -- it finally makes sense now.

thedoctor: Great use of the B-Team, and the Adem Different stuff was amazing -- this is a really intriguing character you've introduced. I'm still not quite sure how to write him myself, but I'm taking notes. Still, the best thing you've written so far has to be the Jerome Saunders subplot -- it was fairly minor in the context of the story but really added a dose of realistic behavior to it. Not everyone's cut out to be a hero, meta or no meta powers, and even "cowards" have their chance to make a difference.

Chewy: I was very pleased to see you throw in a post of your own in there. I hope to be surprised like that more often in the future... Anytime you want to write something in the story, man, please do so.

CaptainSammitch: Like Gooz, I'm glad to see you having more time to post -- that whole "Marduk" situation was made more interesting with the touches of history you threw in, there. The Annunaki have been treated mostly as simply powerful aliens, but that post made me remember that they were around for the dawn of the human race some 35,000 to 40,000 years ago and have been manipulating humanity ever since.

Cowgirl Jack: Great interplay with Bree and Drax -- these kinds of posts are why I enjoy your writing so much. Your Christmas Special posts were good, too.

The Eurostar: Usually I'd tell you over AIM what I thought of your posts, but since I've been away for a while, I figured I'd say it here. Though I could guess what was happening to Saros when he seemingly "killed" everyone and succeeded in turning the world into a literal "Hell on Earth," I enjoyed the way you wrote it out. The Adalia Perigord stuff was awesome.

Grimm: You are the master of suspenseful action, man. I wish I had more time right now to go more into that, but let's just leave it at this: Your posts rock. (Good ideas for the Christmas Special, too.)

Mxy: I saved you for (almost) last because the Mr. Smith stuff you wrote was simply mind-blowing. 'Nuff said. It's too bad the [censored] censor censored out a lot of the shitty words you used.

TTT: Your post was self-serving despite its being a wrap-up of the earlier Mandelovia sub-plot, was WAY TOO LONG, and slowed down the suspensefulness of the story built up by Pro and Mxy. You're running into the danger of isolating your characters away from the rest of the team. Still, the Agent X stuff was interesting, though somewhat implausible.

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GRIMM: It looks like your last post on the CHRISTMAS SPECIAL is gone. You'd better re-post that ASAP if you have it saved on your computer.


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Thanks, TTT. And don't listen to TTT, your big ass post with Axel and Dr. Quantos was excellent. The stuff related to the Mandelovian Time Travel Porject gets more and more intriguing. Which reminds me that I can't wait to see your next post in the Krononauts thread...


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I liked the part with the donkey and stuff.

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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!!


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Grimm : Fantastic job with Naecken's death. Very brutal and to the point. Now, I suggest you seek psychiatric help for whatever pent-up rage that burns within you....





Don't make me angry, Pro. You wouldn't like me when I'm angry. . .;) I see you found time to check the boards. How's the holiday?

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GRIMM: It looks like your last post on the CHRISTMAS SPECIAL is gone. You'd better re-post that ASAP if you have it saved on your computer.




Unfortunately, I don't. I'm gonna have to redo it from scratch. . . oh, well. . .btw,

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Grimm: You are the master of suspenseful action, man. I wish I had more time right now to go more into that, but let's just leave it at this: Your posts rock. (Good ideas for the Christmas Special, too.)





Uh. . .damn. . .thanks, man. I appreciate it.

All of you guys are really good, and being around all of you and learning from you makes me improve. You're the best message board superheroes ever. Happy Holidays to you all.

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To all at Hero Revolution and MBL

MERRY X-MEN... eh... X-MAS!

Have a safe and Happy Holidays!



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The Time Trust himself was a kind of Deus Ex Machina (literally the "God in the Machine" )




Actually, it's literally "God from the Machine", but I'll let it slide...

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Chewy: I was very pleased to see you throw in a post of your own in there. I hope to be surprised like that more often in the future... Anytime you want to write something in the story, man, please do so.




Thanks. I might take you up on that. Right now, I'm gonna be busy with FRINGE stuff, but I will be posting an epilogue in the current story as a lead in to my newest FRINGE team. So, expect more soon, but beyond that... who's to say...

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MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!


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Merry Christmast to you all, guys.

Great posts in the Naecken story, especially Mxy, I know what was going to happen, yet I was excited by it. I will try to add the end this afternoon, if I will have survived my mother-in-law's Christmas dinner.

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Actually, it's literally "God from the Machine", but I'll let it slide...




Better watch that, Chewy, or you're liable to become the official Hero HQ "nitpick"...


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Merry Christmast to you all, guys.




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God bless us everyone! Happy Holidays to all and to all a good night


(does anyone else think its weird that all th emissing PMs are back! Its like a Christmas miracle!!!)


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