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#475934 2005-04-01 8:39 AM
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Good (A Work of Fiction)

She sat between my legs at the head of my bed, and I hugged her close. The print of my thumb crossed the flesh of her stomach. “The Tonight Show” was on.

My eyes were closed so I never saw her, but I could still feel my heart skip a beat when she turned her head and kissed my cheek.

“I want to marry you some day,” she told me.

I rested my chin on her naked shoulder. She smelled like rosemary.

“Is it too soon to say that?”

“Probably,” I told her. “I haven’t shown you how much of a jackass I can be.”

“Come on, I’m serious!” She nudged me and I opened my eyes. Johnny’s monologue was almost over and I didn’t care.

“No, it wasn’t.” I said and softly kissed the nip of her neck. It wasn’t too soon at all.

She leaned her head back and said, “Good.”

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This is good.


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This is good?

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One word for this.... GOOD. I liked it

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that gets a banana:



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