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Coverby Neilencio 
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The Adventures of Max Adventureby Mxy  
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Sequential Farceby Neilencio 
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UntitledBy Marc Campbell and Neilencio 
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Cowgirl Jack's comic and (hopefully)Dave's are forthcoming. We may also see collaborations with Mxy/Drzsmith and Marc/TK. Nowhereman is also encouraged to further display his fine photoshopping skills with more pics of Dave eating poo.
Thanks go to(in no particular order) Neilencio, Uschi, Disco Steve, Mxy, Marc Campbell, Cowgirl Jack, Dave, and, of course, Rob Kamphausen(for graciously hosting the comic in the first place).
As before, any and all questions/comments/criticisms/submissions are welcome! I think I speak for all of us when I say that feedback, positive or negative, is much appreciated.
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Yeah, Superman shirts are retarded.
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"No, you ah!"
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Originally posted by Uschi:
Yeah, Superman shirts are retarded.
Oh, I'm going to go hang myself now. ![[biiiig grin]](images/icons/grin.gif)
Those were great...again! Good job everyone.
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Great cover, Neilencio. I like the little phrases from the comics you put there (add one from yours next time). Sequential Farce is great, but too short! You should post a couple each time, like in the first issue. The art in Marc's thing was great too.
Marc's thing is the kinda thing I'd like to steal. Maybe I should call it comic instead of "thing" from now on to avoid confusion. After all, I did steal Franta's penis. So, back on the comic, is it series or just one comic? Is the guy you? Have you ever done that?
Uschi's comic reminded my of Happy Tree Friends. It'd be awesome as animation. What happened to the other baby, though? It'd have been fun to see it's reaction on the whole thing. Maybe it could have laughed or not give a shit about his family's death. Insensitive bastard.
Four Color Garbage was great too. The lady looks like a dude in page one panel six, though.
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In an unrelated note, double posts suck.
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dude you aint sposed to let your double post give you oral!
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Originally posted by I'm Not Mister Mxypltk:
Great cover, Neilencio. I like the little phrases from the comics you put there (add one from yours next time). Sequential Farce is great, but too short! You should post a couple each time, like in the first issue. The art in Marc's thing was great too.
Marc's thing is the kinda thing I'd like to steal. Maybe I should call it comic instead of "thing" from now on to avoid confusion. After all, I did steal Franta's penis. So, back on the comic, is it series or just one comic? Is the guy you? Have you ever done that?
Uschi's comic reminded my of Happy Tree Friends. It'd be awesome as animation. What happened to the other baby, though? It'd have been fun to see it's reaction on the whole thing. Maybe it could have laughed or not give a shit about his family's death. Insensitive bastard.
Four Color Garbage was great too. The lady looks like a dude in page one panel six, though.
Uhhhh, If I understand this correctly, you liked what I did with Marc's thing - Thank You, I think he did too. Sequential Farce is a series, but the only recurring "thing" in there is the title and the short dude. As for the cover, I liked Dave's more.
Coloring on Uschi's was tops, too bad she won't go out on a date with me.
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If I understand this correctly, you liked what I did with Marc's thing
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Uhhhh, If I understand this correctly, you liked what I did with Marc's thing - Thank You, I think he did too. Sequential Farce is a series, but the only recurring "thing" in there is the title and the short dude. As for the cover, I liked Dave's more.
Coloring on Uschi's was tops, too bad she won't go out on a date with me.
I know sequential farce is a series, I was asking Marc if his comic with you was a series.
I didn't know you colored Uschi's comic (good thing I stopped calling them "thing", that would have sounded nasty), good job.
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Ok I've got a script now. It obeys the laws of mathematics and has glowing fish in it. Who do I send it to?
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Originally posted by Neilencio:
Coloring on Uschi's was tops, too bad she won't go out on a date with me.
I know sequential farce is a series, I was asking Marc if his comic with you was a series.
I didn't know you colored Uschi's comic (good thing I stopped calling them "thing", that would have sounded nasty), good job.
I don't think Marc's thingie was a series.
I didn't color Uschi's comic. I just liked How it was colored.
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Originally posted by I'm Not Mister Mxypltk:
Four Color Garbage was great too. The lady looks like a dude in page one panel six, though.
I guess I'm secretly gay... Hm. Maybe that will be the topic of a future issue.
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Ok I've got a script now. It obeys the laws of mathematics and has glowing fish in it. Who do I send it to?
Cobbasaki@hotmail.com
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Nice job everyone.
Thanks, Dave. I am in complete agreement.
Neilencio, I liked what you did with the little yellow lettering on the cover. Is that a font, or did you play with point sizes to get that big/little effect?
Uschi, if you're still here, I liked your comic. The story was more focused than the first one, but I still like the first one a little better because of its utter strangeness. Interesting panel transition between the "this is the interstate" and "here is the liquor store" panels. I must agree with Mxy that I wanted to know what happened to the other baby. When you work in a more conventional story form, then all the stupid usual criticisms apply, unfortunately.
The young'ns looked not unlike Pokemon -- was this some hidden subtext, perhaps unintended? Maybe your comic was a meditation on the frustrations of Pokemon collecting.
Disco, Four-Color Garbage forces me to relive high school. Your stuff has a really sophisticated poignant quality. I liked what you did with the reflection in the glasses that went away. Congrats also on getting the cover spot this ish.
Mxy, Max Adventure hasn't disappointed yet. I was incredibly pleased to see Max in the world of wizards and dragons. The death of Winged Justice was a shock, but nothing could prepare me for the walking penis. With a sword, no less. How much more Freudian can you get? I don't know what your comic is trying to tell me on a symbolic level, but it sure is fun.
Neilencio, I liked Sequential Farce. You opted for grayscale this time, I see. I don't know if my comment last time infuenced your decision, but...I still prefer SF in line art only! I don't know why. Maybe it reminds me of a daily newspaper strip, and that's what my eye expects to see. But anyway a fine extension of the SF brand.
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Marc's thing is the kinda thing I'd like to steal. Maybe I should call it comic instead of "thing" from now on to avoid confusion. After all, I did steal Franta's penis. So, back on the comic, is it series or just one comic? Is the guy you? Have you ever done that?
Thanks, Mxy! The thing's working title was "Bird the Bug," but the title was dropped for lack of actual birds and bugs in the script. It was a one-shot.
The writer is me in the sense that he is All Writers, the Everyman Writer. He sort of looks like me, although I don't wear glasses and my hair is shorter. But the character design was all Neilencio. I didn't describe the writer at all in the script. Neilencio supplied 100% of the visuals.
I have received many rejection letters in my day for manuscripts submitted to publishers, but I never tried sending a publisher a rejection letter to see if they would send me a manuscript.
Let me take this opportunity to thank comrade Neilencio for a job well done. He cranked out twelve quality panels in about twelve hours. That must be some kind of record. Neilencio, it was great working with you. Let's do it again sometime, eh?
TK, if you're out there, I still have to write out that horror one-pager for you. You're on break now, right? I'll have to get the script to you before the spring semester starts.
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Uschi, if you're still here, I liked your comic. The story was more focused than the first one, but I still like the first one a little better because of its utter strangeness. Interesting panel transition between the "this is the interstate" and "here is the liquor store" panels. I must agree with Mxy that I wanted to know what happened to the other baby. When you work in a more conventional story form, then all the stupid usual criticisms apply, unfortunately.
The young'ns looked not unlike Pokemon -- was this some hidden subtext, perhaps unintended? Maybe your comic was a meditation on the frustrations of Pokemon collecting.
The story was more focused because A)it is based on true events and B)I sketched out the plot before I drew it rather than just drawing and seeing where it went. Like I did on the Private Eye comic. That ninja came out of nowhere, I tell you what.
The 'interesting panel division' is due to Animalman not double returning between images. It is spaced as pages correctly on my website web page (....there's also a new pic under 'other random stuff' if you're interested.)
There were, in the comic, two other babies. I never saw these in real life, I just kinda assumed. And I needed something else in the panel. Why the hell should I put what happens to them in? That'd be boring. The end of that comic is the fucking END. Who gives a rat's ass?! Maybe they die! Maybe the mom fox (who hasen't died yet in reality. still lurks around.) went home and found another daddy fox and fucked around and now they have more fox friends. I DON'T CARE. And if I don't care, and it's MY story, WHY in HELL should anyone else?
The little fox is round because the one I ran over (see it now?  -(shit!) me in the first car) was so fluffy it looked round as it hopped in front of my car and went ba-thump. I noticed it looks like Pikachu whilst coloring. And I never played Pokemon. But I saw the show a couple times and Team Rocket is awsome.
As for 'the stupid usual critisisms' applying, whoopty fucking shit, ok? I've hated that comic since two days after I finished it. Perspective is WAY off in a LOT of the panels, colors are cheap and flat, the stupid 'shine' on my car looks like shit and it's the only car I did it to so that just makes it WORSE, the guy in the second car looks like a god damn muppet, the cars all suck donkey balls, there's WAY too many stray lines..... and I never claimed to be a writer. I know I can't write. So fuck yourself, mmkay?
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Disco, Four-Color Garbage forces me to relive high school. Your stuff has a really sophisticated poignant quality. I liked what you did with the reflection in the glasses that went away. Congrats also on getting the cover spot this ish.
Thank you, sir.
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So fuck yourself, mmkay?
But...but...I gave you a good review.
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Be glad you didn't tell her she was cute... right Disco?
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