TTT - I've been editing the fuck out of Chapter 1 of McKenzie's Chrononauts.
I've unfortunately done it as an e-mail to your gmail account, not as a word doc. Next time I'll do it as a word doc so you can see the mark-up.
Its just the first brush of paint. I'll go over it again, but in the meantime will send you the first draft tonight so you can get a sene of what I've done and post it at the site.
