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I'm powering a time machine. Cool. 
Though I think the part where it says TTT was sleeping or just woke up should be changed to something like, finished recharging or whatever. He's an android, after all.
Dontcha mean robot? 
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i always thought he was a cy·borg
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amazing!, hybrid.
except for all the ’s.
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Yes... Seems to happen whenever a copy and paste from word. Oh well should be fixed now. Enjoy!
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U sure R making up 4 lost time, dude.
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Yeah i'm trying. I'd tried to come back here more but I was always to busy working on this and walking into some writers block with it. The sad thing is that I've only got a little more written so far and I've got so much more planned for this story.
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It looks really good. Watcha gonna do with all the characters? I know you mentioned a few pages back, but I'm too lazy to go look.
Buy the way, what happened to Kaz?
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Alright but I'll have to provide some spoiler space
Wednesday- We've already seen
La Machine- Using his old bio I took and used his origin of being struck by lightning during a game. Not having a team to go to and use his new powers he grows frustrated with them and decides instead to sue the team and the stadium using the money he wins to buy the team. Since then he becomes arrogant, snobby, and cold hearted.
Ace- Another old bio, I made his hypnotation (if thats a word) give him more of a need to belong to a team and be a superhero. But again with out the team, Ace has become a bit loopy and has also become homeless.
Fused- He has become a world famous DJ.
Registered Member 552- He has taken over the throne to Doesntreallyexistia and since Chant had saved his land from war with Chantina he has started working with Chant in his world conquest.
Dogg- Without the teams help with the CSF he became smith-ed
Nuiko and Tommy- They're still with HH and their team has become imprisoned by Chant.
Centurian- Killed by CSF
Chessmaster- Not sure if I should still include him or not but I did have plans to make him use his powers and be an architect.
Hybrid- Working for the government studying his powers and working to release an entire army of hybrid super soldiers.
Brittanica- Never having the team to meet his wife Di-Bat-Pho he now lives with his brother The Southern Cross and works in secret with UNUT (because the teams have been disbanded). He lives a lonely life without his wife
Di-Bat-Pho- Works for the HH (the holiday HH) and is also lonely.
Midnight Spectre- Lives a humble and quiet life in the mountains of Tibet training with fellow monks. He no longer believes in the use of violence to solve problems.
TTT- is imprisoned by Chant
SMM- At first I didn't really know what I was going to do with your character but then I figured it out. With his powers of stealing any other metas powers whenever he wanted I figured he'd be the perfect enforcer for Chants Meta prison. Course I didn't want to make his character look bad either so I made the excuse for why he'd do this being that his sidekick Statika was being held hostage by Chant and if he didn't do it he'd die.
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You have a very good grasp of JLR history. But I've probably said that already.
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Yeah I've had a little help plus I've read most of the stories. I even tried to put in some things from all of the older stories as you can probably tell. The War The Convention, Tractor Trailer Bob, etc. It's fun
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Yeah, it is in continuity, isn't it?
Hmm... I'd have to find room for Dogg's stories as well, though. I'll PM Rob and see if he wouldn't mind extending signature space... again.
you don't have to include my shorts in your sig, since they're not official "JLR" stories but solo-adventures that intertwine with a JLR story.
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Alright but I'll have to provide some spoiler space
Wednesday- We've already seen
La Machine- Using his old bio I took and used his origin of being struck by lightning during a game. Not having a team to go to and use his new powers he grows frustrated with them and decides instead to sue the team and the stadium using the money he wins to buy the team. Since then he becomes arrogant, snobby, and cold hearted.
Ace- Another old bio, I made his hypnotation (if thats a word) give him more of a need to belong to a team and be a superhero. But again with out the team, Ace has become a bit loopy and has also become homeless.
Fused- He has become a world famous DJ.
Registered Member 552- He has taken over the throne to Doesntreallyexistia and since Chant had saved his land from war with Chantina he has started working with Chant in his world conquest.
Dogg- Without the teams help with the CSF he became smith-ed
Nuiko and Tommy- They're still with HH and their team has become imprisoned by Chant.
Centurian- Killed by CSF
Chessmaster- Not sure if I should still include him or not but I did have plans to make him use his powers and be an architect.
Hybrid- Working for the government studying his powers and working to release an entire army of hybrid super soldiers.
Brittanica- Never having the team to meet his wife Di-Bat-Pho he now lives with his brother The Southern Cross and works in secret with UNUT (because the teams have been disbanded). He lives a lonely life without his wife
Di-Bat-Pho- Works for the HH (the holiday HH) and is also lonely.
Midnight Spectre- Lives a humble and quiet life in the mountains of Tibet training with fellow monks. He no longer believes in the use of violence to solve problems.
TTT- is imprisoned by Chant
SMM- At first I didn't really know what I was going to do with your character but then I figured it out. With his powers of stealing any other metas powers whenever he wanted I figured he'd be the perfect enforcer for Chants Meta prison. Course I didn't want to make his character look bad either so I made the excuse for why he'd do this being that his sidekick Statika was being held hostage by Chant and if he didn't do it he'd die.
Brit: [sticking fingers in ears, closing eyes and going La-La-La!]
I haven't read your new posts yet!!!!! 
Thanks for the spoiler warning 
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Yeah, it is in continuity, isn't it?
Hmm... I'd have to find room for Dogg's stories as well, though. I'll PM Rob and see if he wouldn't mind extending signature space... again.
you don't have to include my shorts in your sig, since they're not official "JLR" stories but solo-adventures that intertwine with a JLR story.
It's okay SD, we're including your stories into the sig line. Not your shorts.
As long as we don't have to see Wednesday's shorts in his sig line... 
Hmmm... if we did, would that make it his washing line?
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 Nah, I meant my short stories (that I affectionately call my shorts .)
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nice avatar.
and your short stories really should be included anyway. if it's in continuity, the public must be told about it in all of my 6700+ posts.
membership has its privileges.
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Indeed.  Wednesday, PM coming your way in just a tick. Ta! Brit
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OK Wed, PM sent. Got to go now. It's 12.12am and DBP is watching... But if you have time PM me back or e-mail. Ta! Brit Morning all!
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morning brit.
pm'ed you.
then pm'ed you again.
all is well.
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SMM- At first I didn't really know what I was going to do with your character but then I figured it out. With his powers of stealing any other metas powers whenever he wanted I figured he'd be the perfect enforcer for Chants Meta prison. Course I didn't want to make his character look bad either so I made the excuse for why he'd do this being that his sidekick Statika was being held hostage by Chant and if he didn't do it he'd die.
Cool. He's like Captain Marvel in Batman: The Dark Knight Returns. If you do ever feel the need to write Statika, my advice is this: He's posh, and brainless.
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Hi guys, It's me Centurian.  Sorry I haven't been around for a while. Got in trouble with my Mom for spending too much time on the computer.  But now that school's finished, I'm allowed back on.  It's been so long since I've been here, that I've forgotten my password. So had to create a new ID.  Really enjoying the new adventure and Hybrid's story too. And I'll vote in the Starsky-Hutch awards soon. Alex
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Centurian! Nice to have you back, and in a new improved version.
Mums ar evil with computer time. Fortunately we now have broadband, so her number 1 excuse (supposing somebody tried to call us whilst you were online?) has gone bye-bye. My advice is wait until she's out, then hop online.
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toldja he was coming back. i told you all!
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Glory be praised, brethren, I have Seen the light!
Gimm an 'AMEN!'
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Actually, those are the foglights of a very large semi truck.
You should probably move out of the way now.
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[whisper]sorry![/whisper]
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D0GG, are you trying to kill me?
BTW, I'll probably be hiding out here at the moment. Vanguard are in the midst of a bit of a row, so I'm hiding out at the moment.
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i take it that you're hiding out here at the moment, then.
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I kinda did go over the top a bit there, didn't I?
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a little.
but we love you anyway.
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Posted to weapons. In the next Spandex post he should be thoroughly switched and ready for action
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Hey, good post, SMM. We may now actually enjoy some plot progression!
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Dear friends and fellow members of the Writers Block.
As I didn't get any of you Christmas cards or presents this year, please allow me to present my Christmas offering to you...
THE HOLIDAY HEROES
As you will probably tell, it's far from complete. But I plan to have the conclusion of this story posted prior to New Years.
But in the meantime, please enjoy and have a Safe and Merry Christmas!
Ta!
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Is this anything to do with the team Di Bat Pho joins in CSF? Cos that would be kinda weird, havign the team be formed after di Bat Pho has joined it (I smell the work of Father Time here...). And I've never heard of Talk Like a Pirate Day.
The story looks really good, though. Who's betting that it's Jack Frost (that dastardly villain) who's behind this evil?
Ps: Will Mother's Day be targeted?
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Hi SMM, Yes these are the same Holiday Heroes which DBP joins. But this is their origin story. Remember DBP is recruited by them, during CSF! ***My useless information ability is tingling**** Indeed there is a Talk Like a Pirate Day, info can be found here  You'll just have to wait and see who the villain is... The Founding members of the Holiday Heroes are: - Father Time (New Years Day - 1 Jan)
- Cupid (Valentine's Day - 14 Feb)
- Easter Rabbit (Easter - Mar-Apr)
- Jack O'Lantern (Halloween - 31 Oct)
- Hollie (Boxing Day - 26 Dec)
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- Secret Santa
Other members appearing (or mentioned) in CSF!, included: - Di Bat Pho (Chinese New Year - Jan-Feb) - though this means Di Bat Pho, will have to change her identity to Yuan Tan (Chinese for Chinese New Year)
- The Anzac Spirit (Anzac Day - 25 April)
- Santa Claus (Christmas Day - 25 Dec)
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- The Queen (Queen's Birthday - various)
If you all like, I'm happy to write the ongoing adventures of The Holiday Heroes. But I'm only going to post these around holidays and event days (in keeping with the team's theme). Besides, I have several other members in mind, which I'm sure I can incorporate.
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Wednesday's not appearing in this story??
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Oh, and jump on ICQ, people!
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