RKMBs Forums .::Important::. Writer's Block Talk is Hell? ( the Talk thread)

Yeah, yeah......I know I got bit by the bug too.

Doc and Sammich's solos really helped me to understand their characters more.........so I thought this will help ya'll and to be honest me in understanding Tayden.

but anyway.....

.........sit back and enjoy the Battle for Heaven (and for Tayden)

By the way can one of you moderator types change the name of this talk thread I made it awfully close to the name of the story....its confusing

[ 01-15-2003, 08:32 PM: Message edited by: Grimm ]

You can do that yourself. Just edit the first post. That should do it.

Done. Let me know what you think.

thats cool, thanks

A little reminiscant of Milton's Paradise Lost so far.

Not many other places for reference............Bible is vague on the war......its mentioned in Revalation and Isiah and Daniel only in passing.

Well, posted Sonhaven. Hope you likey.

Cool Grimmy.....I was going to post a city meeting anyway....thats cool......I think next It would be good for a couple of things to happen either I can post them or anyone who wants to volunteer there take on it.

1. I want Tayden to meet with Gabriel or Micheal and I'd like for what they say to be inspirational to him.

2. Lucier needs to approach Tayden as an individual.......telling him concievable lies...and then Tayden haveing a moment of doubt....then rebuking Lucifer and calling him on his soon to come fall.

3. One more interaction with Axium and a show of growing disent.

4. Finally the big battle begins....detail and action.

Everyone feel free to add to this....Its a solo thread but not a solo author....everybody should have a hand in creating this character......(Chewy I'd like to see your input on this)

Have fun

None too shabby, and a lot less depressing than my solo thread! I like it so far. :)

I hope you don't mind that I posted in the story.

Nah, he asked for people to post.

Dude, of course I dont mind. I asked ya'll to post. I want everyone to have fun and get a feel for Tayden. And by the way your post was good.

Hey....if any of you JRL folks are reading this and have input to add to the story....feel free to post......I only ask that you follow the plot.

[ 01-18-2003, 06:29 AM: Message edited by: Sonhaven ]

Great work Sonhaven.

If you don't mind, I'd like to take on writing Michael the archangel for the duration of this story. I'm very familiar with all the biblical accounts mentioning the archangel, and I feel that I can portray him with consistent theological accuracy.

Cool............Go for it............the only thing I'm gonna mention about him is Tayen's perspective of seeing Micheal cast Lucifer out...

THE WAR HAS BEGUN...........detail of emotion and action.......make it real fellas......

Sammitch, Grimm, anybody............ya'll going to get in on this or what.

I must say i am impressed with the actual idea for the story.
I just read it today and it´s great guys. Luckily this story is set in the past...as for the Devil´s fate in the present...see my solo *shameless plug*

Thanks for letting me in on this, Sonhaven.

The gloves are coming off, but I thought it would be more appropriate if there were one last attempt at peace.

Real good post......sammitch........remember when we do the battle............draw it out with detail and emotion from the angels...........Keep up the great posts!

I though the fall was related to the sins commited by the Grigori and the Nephilim... as accounted (briefly) in the Genesi and (more detailed) in the book of Enoch.

Can you biblical guys help me on the matter? There were two falls? Or the war with Lucifer and the fall of Azazel are two versions of the same "fact"?

Thanks in advance.

The only fall spoke of in the Bible is Lucifer's. Azreal is never mentioned.

Azazel and Azreal are two different "characters". You guys are gonna make me break out the books, aren't you. . .

Very impressive story, Tayden! I just had a chance to read it just now. Makes me wish Alan Moore had done an expanded version of his Phantom Stranger origin story, showing how the angels (including one angel named "Etrigan" ... heh) chose their sides and all.

The non-Biblical angelic characters (except of course for Tayden) seem to be mostly borrowed from Milton and Jewish Tales of the Ancient Times. Later writers would borrow those names and incorporate them into exobiblical mythology.

Don't take offense at this sammitch. I Just a couple comments about some discrepencies in our story.

A) In all of my post I try an show that Tayden and the angels are courageous for not giving in. In all your post (with the exception of Micheal, they cower at some point)

B) In two post I set up that Tayden has an axe (for later reasons) and in your last post he drew a sword.

I'm not bitching at you, man. I just don't think that I expressed very well, if at all, where I was going. So, its my fault for the mix up.

They don't really give in. You gotta realize that there are more emotions going on here than simply fear - which in my understanding is not entirely foreign even to celestial beings. The angels are reluctant to fight because they still hold out hope that Lucifer might change his ways - a point I have repeatedly tried to emphasize in the story. I'll work a bit more on the angels' reactions in the future.