RKMBs Forums .::Important::. Writer's Block The Champions : Beginnings and Origins.

I had edited chapter 51 before I posted it here; apparently, I had not been as thorough as I thought I had been.

I found several spelling and grammatical errors. They have been corrected.

My mother came over for a visit today.

She read the new chapter. She told me that there is a dramatic improvement in my writing since chapter 49.

She had read a few chapters prior to the more recent ones.

She informed me that I had failed at describing people, places, and objects adequately.

At first, I was upset.

I gave what she had told me some thought.

I looked at what I had been writing and realized that she was indeed correct.

I extrapolated that future chapters could improve, but only if I made a greater effort at improving my writing technique.

I am currently taking a lot more time on each chapter. I post them on another site of mine and take a few days instead of a few hours to create a new segment of this story.

I want each chapter to be better than the one that preceded it. I am working harder to ensure this.

I'm loving writing more and more, and I want it to show.