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Cowgirl Jack said:Hope the last post was good. Euro, Chewy totally kicks my but at writing Emmanuel, but I'm really busting my butt here trying to get him right. Let me know if that was an okay follow-up to the Walrus.



Very good, CJ.

At first I found just the last line, where he introduce himself, somehow out of character... why the hell he should be so nice with his capturer?
Then, thinking of it, a boy that was looking for a better way of life to travel from Nigeria across the Sahara, and then sail over a crowded little boat over the Mediterranean, toward a land of which he doesn't know the language...

...he must be much more bold than how I envisioned them.

So, very good indeed. I think you shaped perfectly Emmanuel's behaviour.